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                                                           ဒါေတာင္ .. …

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                                                           ေသခ်င္စိတ္ကို

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                                                                     ~~~

                                                           စိတ္ထိခိုက္စရာေတြ

                                                           မွန္မွန္လည္ပတ္ေနတဲ့

                                                           ဒီအသိုင္းအဝုိင္းၾကားမွာ

                                                           ဟန္ေဆာင္အျပံဳးေတြနဲ႔

                                                           ေသေအာင္ရုန္းခဲ့ပါတယ္

                                                           ဒါေတာင္ .. …

                                                           ကံတရားက

                                                           လက္ခါခ်ခဲ့ေတာ့

                                                           သိပ္နာတယ္  အေမ
                                                                     ~~~

                                                           စုတ္ျပတ္သတ္ေနတဲ့

                                                           ရင္ဘတ္ကဒဏ္ရာတစ္ခုနဲ႔

                                                           မ်က္လံုးေပါက္မတတ္

                                                           ငိုေၾကြးခဲ့တယ္

                                                           ဒါေတာင္ .. …

                                                           နံရံကနားေတြ  ပင္းေနတာ 

                                                           ေကာင္းကင္ကမ်က္လံုးေတြ  ကန္းေနတာ

                                                           သိပ္နာတယ္  အေမ ။
                                                                                         Ray
21st December, 2011
20:20
  

In: ကဗ်ာ Posted By: Date: Dec 22, 2011
Comment #1

ေကာင္းတယ္ဗ်ာ….

commentinfo By: ေကာင္ေလး at Dec 22, 2011
Comment #2

ကဗ်ာကိုအားေပးတဲ့ ေကာင္ေလး ေက်းဇူးပါဗ်ာ ။
ဒဏ္ရာေတြေတာ့ ေကာင္းေကာင္းမက်က္ေသးဘူးဗ် ရင္ထဲမွာ တႏံု႕ႏံု႔နာက်င္ေနတုန္းဘဲ ဒါေပမယ့္ ကဗ်ာေရးလိုက္ရင္ ခံစားရတာေတြ နည္းနည္းသက္သာသြားမယ္ထင္လုိ႔ နာက်ည္းေနတာေတြကို စာရြက္ေပၚအန္ခ်လိုက္ရံုသက္သက္ပါ ကဗ်ာလုိ႔ေတာ့မဆိုႏုိင္ပါဘူး ။

commentinfo By: X - ray at Dec 22, 2011
Comment #3

ခံစားခ်က္ေတြတုိက္ဆုိင္တယ္ဗ်ာ….
သိပ္နာတယ္အေမ…ဟုတ္တယ္
သိပ္နာတယ္…..
ေလးစားလွ်က္

commentinfo By: sharon myorr myor at Dec 26, 2011
Comment #4

ဒါေပါ့ဗ်ာ တစ္ခါတစ္ေလေတာ့လည္း ကၽြန္ေတာ္တို႔သူငယ္ခ်င္းေတြ ရင္ဘတ္အခ်င္းခ်င္းတိုက္မိတတ္ပါတယ္ အားေပးတဲ့အတြက္ ေက်းဇူးပါ sharon myorr myor ။
With respect,
RAY

commentinfo By: X - ray at Dec 28, 2011
Comment #5

ကၽြန္ေတာ္..ဒီကဗ်ာေလးကိုအရမ္းၾကိဳက္ပါတယ္ခင္ဗ်ာ

commentinfo By: အသဲကြဲမိုး at Jan 18, 2012
Comment #6

ၾကိဳက္ပါဗ်ာ ၾကိဳက္ပါ စိတ္ရွိလက္ရွိၾကိဳက္ႏိုင္ပါတယ္ ကဗ်ာကိုေျပာတာေနာ္
ကဗ်ာေလး အားေပးသြားတဲ့ အစ္မေတာ္ ေက်းဇူးကမၻာပါဗ်ာ
ေနာင္လည္း ကၽြန္ေတာ့ကဗ်ာေတြ လိုတာရွိရင္ စိတ္ထဲရွိတဲ့အတိုင္းေဝဖန္လုိ႔ရပါတယ္ ။
With respect,
RAY

commentinfo By: X - ray at Jan 18, 2012
Comment #7

စိတ္ထိခိုက္စရာေတြ

မွန္မွန္လည္ပတ္ေနတဲ့

ဒီအသိုင္းအဝုိင္းၾကားမွာ

ဟန္ေဆာင္အျပံဳးေတြနဲ႔

ေသေအာင္ရုန္းခဲ့ပါတယ္

ဒါေတာင္ .. …

ကံတရားက

လက္ခါခ်ခဲ့ေတာ့

သိပ္နာတယ္ အေမ

commentinfo By: May Kha at Jan 18, 2012
Comment #8

ကဗ်ာကိုအားေပးသြားတဲ့အတြက္ ေက်းဇူးပါ မေမခေရ ~

With respect,
RAY

commentinfo By: X - ray at Jul 9, 2013
Comment #9

Ray
အ၇မ္းျကိုကတယ္ ဒီကဗ်ာကို
အားေပးေနတယ္ဟာ။

commentinfo By: ေကသရီ at Jul 9, 2013
Comment #10

ေက်းဇူးပါ မေကသရီ ~
အစ္မေနေကာင္းရဲ႕လားဗ် မေတြ႕တာၾကာေပါ့ ~~

With respect,
RAY

commentinfo By: X - ray at Jul 10, 2013
Comment #11

very nice this poem

commentinfo By: nilarthan at Jul 11, 2013
Comment #12

ေက်းဇူးပါဗ်ာ မနီလာသန္း ~

With respect,
RAY

commentinfo By: X - ray at Jul 11, 2013

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