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Brilliant Torture (Kitty Yang)
With loneliness beyond imagination,
it just keeps on torturing
With desire beyond sensation,
it just keeps on killing
For every stab in my heart,
I hope it could just tear me apart
For every drop of blood,
I wish there were enough tears to shed
Scream because it’s burning
but the pain is without a reason
Moan because I’m dying
but the death is without a symptoms
I hate to be expecting
yet I am everlastingly waiting
Though I feel like giving up
the reality could drive me nuts.
20th June 2009
-=Kitty Yang=-
[Your Brilliant Torture]
Comment #2
thank you for pointing out bird bird..
ဟာဂ်ာ.. ေနာက္ပါနဲ႔.. အဲဒီလို ေျပာၾကတယ္ဟုတ္ဘူးလား..
ေရးရတဲ႔သူေတာင္ မေသခ်ာေတာ႔ဘူး… ဟင့္… မွားေနလို႔လား.. ဟီးဟီး…
အမ္နီးေ၀း.. ဘတ္ဘတ္ကြ.. အဲဗားကြန္မန္႔တဲ႔ ဘတ္ဘတ္!!!!
By: Kitty Yang at Jun 19, 2009
Comment #3
အဟတ္… ဘတ္ဘတ္မွ မဟုတ္ပါဘူး… အီးအမ္အက္စ္ေလးလည္း ေပးပါတယ္ဂ်ာ… 😛 ရမ္းမိုက္ခ်စ္… ခိုက္သြားပါတယ္… ငါ့ရည္းစားသာငါ့ကိုအဲလိုလာေပးႀကည့္… ဖက္နမ္းပစ္ပလိုက္မယ္ 😛 Oh… Don’t be xo hurt, babe ဆိုၿပီး ႏွစ္သိမ့္ပစ္ပလိုက္မယ္ကြ 😛 lolz
By: Ei Mon Soe at Jun 20, 2009
Comment #4
Yikes!!!!!!! I love it……….you really got potential 🙂
By: friendchen at Sep 7, 2009
Comment #6
This is the second time I read your poem. I read it a year ago and I read it now again.. and I still like it. It got feeling 🙂
By: friendchen at May 26, 2010
Comment #8
i hate to be expecting,
yet i m everlastingly waiting
though i feel like giving up
the reality could drive me nuts.
it’s just keep on killing.
By: ei lay at May 2, 2012
Comment #1
symptoms … meow meow spelled wrong!!! hehe … great poem … ေနာက္ဆံုး စာေၾကာင္းေတာ့ နားမလည္ဘူး … ဘာတဲ့ … လက္ေတြ႕ဘ၀က ငါ့ကို သစ္ေစ့ေလးေတြ ေမာင္းေပးႏိုင္တယ္တဲ့။