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ဒီလိုနဲ ့တျဖည္းျဖည္း
ငါတို ့ေ၀းရေတာ့မယ္ထင္ရဲ ့
ကမၻာအျပင္တစ္ဖက္ျခမ္းမုိးမီးေလာင္သလို
ငါ ရင္အစံုဘယ္ဖက္အျခမ္း
ျပာက်ေတာမယ္ကဲြ ့…..
ဒီတခါနင္ရြဲ ့တာသိပ္လြန္တယ္ေနာ္
အတိတ္ႏြံထဲမွာငါမရွိ
ငါသိတာငါေျပာျပမယ္ဟာ
သဘာ၀ကိုလြန္ေျမာက္
ငါနင့္ကုိ….ရြံေၾကာက္ၾကီးျဖစ္သြားခဲ့ဘီ………..
ဒီလိုနဲ ့ တျဖည္းျဖည္း
ငါတို ့ေ၀းရေတာ့မယ္ထင္ရဲ ့
ရင္နာစရာနမိတ္ဆိုးေတြေလွာင္
ဟန္မေဆာင္နုိင္ေအာင္ကြယ္၀ွက္
ငါ့အသဲ တစ္ကယ္အက္ခဲ ့ေလသလား
အေသအခ်ာစဥ္းစား
နင့္အနားမွာလဲေနခ်င္စိတ္ကုန္ဆံုး
ငါ့နွလံုးခုန္သံေတြလဲ
ျဗဳန္းခနဲေအးစက္သြားခဲ့ဘီ………..
ဒီလိုနဲ ့တျဖည္းျဖည္း
ငါတို ့ေ၀းရေတာ့မယ္ထင္ရဲ ့
တခ်က္ေလးေျပးၾကည့္လိုက္တယ္
ေဖးမမဲ့သူေတာင္မရွီခဲ့ဘူး
အပူေရာင္ရုပ္အပ်က္နဲ ့
အမူယာပုိနွဳတ္မဆက္ရဲေတာ့ပါဘူး
ကုိ္ယ္ဟာကိုေတာ့ ဟုတ္လွဘီမာန္မတက္နဲ ့
ငါခ်န္ခဲ့တဲ ့မာယာဟာ
မနက္ဖန္ တိုင္းျပံဳးနိုင္ဖို ့အတြက္
နင့္နွလံုးခုန္သံေတြ
ပံုမွန္လည္ပတ္ပါေစ………
စစ္စစ္(ခ)မိုးသူ(ေတာင္ၾကီး)
26 Sep 2011/01:28 AM
Comment #2
တခ်က္ေလးေျပးၾကည့္လိုက္တယ္
ေဖးမမဲ့သူေတာင္မရွီခဲ့ဘူး
အပူေရာင္ရုပ္အပ်က္နဲ ့
အမူယာပုိနွဳတ္မဆက္ရဲေတာ့ပါဘူး …လွလုိက္တဲ ့စာသားေလးးးးးးးးးး
By: sharon myorr myor at Sep 29, 2011
Comment #3
Sorry to comment your poem.
I think It’s your sided thought and you couldn’t open your heart and I can see your strictly keeping of secret spiritual mind.
But I love it. But I didn’t want to be away your sweet one or friend because of your silent heart. Don’t blame on the other who was done the wrong thing unintentionally and you should explain what, how, and why you felt like that directly to yours one. Everybody has done wrong thing once, may be more in life. If u mature, you can understand your one and open your felling mutually and frankly. sorry to bother you and your feelings. It’ll be OK soon. I hope. Don’t feel a lot. and stay not away from your love one to get mutual understanding. Your love one will not understand u lastly.Think the actual life, Day dreaming thought will not be activated in real life
with best wishes. Tway Yeike 29. 9.2011
By: Sone yay at Sep 30, 2011
Comment #4
Sone yay ..I know who you are but i think these case is unconcerning with you Bcoz you’re beclever in conversation so don’t do like that
you shouldn’t intervene between two lover .if you become intolerable by your friend you should die at there ..By the way we walk on by straight way
you said that words>>>Don’t blame on the other who was done the wrong thing unintentionally<<<<< why do you use like that ..disaffected words for me so very angry
plz don't come again on this page next time . you see!!! i can't explain whatever i can . my sweet one already understand upon me .
so don't be distrub with your obscenely language stop here right now..so sorry
By: စစ္ စစ္ at Sep 30, 2011
Comment #1
အာ………….goodလုိက္တာ ဗ် ာ