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တိုက္ၾကီးတာၾကီး
အိမ္ၾကီး ကားၾကီးေတြနဲ႔
သိပ္ၿပီး
ကိန္းၾကီးခမ္းၾကီး စကားေတြမေၿပာပါနဲ႔လား
ၿမိဳ႔ကေလးရယ္….

ငါက…
ပလက္ေဖာင္းေပၚအၿမဲတမ္းေတြ႔ေနရတဲ
မွတ္တိုင္မွာ ကားရပ္ေစာင္႔ေနရတဲ႔
နင္႔ၿမိဳ႔ရဲ႔
တစ္ေန႔လုပ္တစ္ေန႔စား အလုပ္သမားတစ္ေယာက္ပါ…

နင္႔ေၿခတစ္လွမ္းလုိ…
ငါ႔ေၿခတစ္လွမ္းက
ကုေဋတစ္သန္း မတန္ပါဘူး

နင္႔အရယ္အသမ္းတစ္ခုလုိ…
ငါ႔အရယ္အသမ္းတစ္ခုက
နန္းမဆန္ပါဘူး

အခ်ိန္တန္ရင္ …
ၾကယ္ကေလးတစ္လုံးတည္ခင္းတဲ႔
ညစာကုိ ငါစားတယ္

(အထူးသၿဖင္႔…)
နင္႔လုိလူတန္းစားေတြ
ဘယ္လုိမွမမက္ရဲတ႔ဲ
စက္ဆုပ္ရြံရွာဖြယ္
အိပ္မက္တစ္ခုကုိငါမက္တယ္…

အမွဳိက္ေတြနဲ႔
ၾကြက္ေတြသာရွိတဲ႔
ငါ႔ေၿမေအာက္အခန္းေလးဟာ
ငရဲေတာ႔ ငရဲအခန္းပါ
ဒါေပမဲ႔ ငါ႔ကမၻာ….

အခ်ိန္ရာသီက
ငါ႔လုိလူေတြကုိ
ငါ႔လုိလူေတြကုိ..
လွည္းက်င္း စုပုံၿပီး မီးမရွဳိ႔ေသးသေရြ႔…

နင္႔ၿမိဳ႔မွာ
ေဟာဒီ ရင္သပ္ရွဳေမာဖြယ္ေကာင္းတဲ႔
နင္႔ၿမိဳ႔မွာ…

မီးခုိလုိ ငါအူေနရဦးမွာပါ…

In: ကဗ်ာ Posted By: Date: Dec 5, 2012
Comment #1

အဲဒီ့ညစာ အတူလက္ဆံုစားရမွာပါရွင့္ ၿမိဳ႔ကေလးမွာေပ်ာ္ပါေစ အုတ္ခ်ပ္ေတြစီလာႏိုင္ပါေစရွင္

commentinfo By: ေမပ်ဳိ at Dec 5, 2012
Comment #2

ခင္ဗ်ားေလးရဲ႔ ဆႏၵၿပဳမွဳ ကုိ က်ဳပ္ အၿမတ္တနဳိး အေလးၿပဳပါတယ္…..ခံစားေပးတဲ႔အတြက္ ေက်းဇူးတင္ပါတယ္…

commentinfo By: kyawsanoo at Dec 5, 2012
Comment #3

R..
Ei ka dot e lo ma htin par bu.
‘Thu ma’ 1 yout de be lo hma ma pyaw naing lout par bu.
A chit hmar kwar char hmu lone wa ma Shi par.
Pyine sine hmu dot Shi de.(be Thu ka po p nar le pay naing le so tar)
Pyine sa yar ma hote par.(mar na,gone & pa kar ta na)

commentinfo By: ei lay at Dec 5, 2012
Comment #4

အာ…
အိကေတာ႔ …. အဲလုိမထင္ပါဘူး
‘သူမ’တစ္ေယာက္တည္းပဲလုိ႔ မွ မေၿပာနုိင္ေလာက္ပါဘူး…
အခ်စ္မွာ ကြာၿခားမွဳလုံး၀မရိွပါ….
ပိုင္ဆိုင္မွဳေတာ႔ ရွိတယ္…(ဘယ္သူကပုိၿပီး နားလည္ေပးနိဳင္လဲဆုိတာ…)
ၿပိဳင္ဆရာမဟုတ္ပါ….(မာန,ဂုဏ္,ပကာသန)

Thanks for your appreciation…

commentinfo By: kyawsanoo at Dec 6, 2012
Comment #5

He..he..
1 kyaung hmar nay de.
😛
I mean “only one she won’t b happy without u”.

commentinfo By: ei lay at Dec 8, 2012
Comment #6

Yes…
She won’t be happy without me…..
But , she cannot confront everything together with me….
The worst case is she cannot trust me because I ‘m a man of poem….
She always thinks she loses something making love with me….
I think I haven’t any mistake she cannot accept ….
I love poems, and freedom.
I hate moneys and glory, worth, or fame.

Cannot she love on this type of person….?

commentinfo By: kyawsanoo at Dec 10, 2012
Comment #7

U said,,,
She won’t b happy without u,right?
1. U urself understand the strong powerful conditions between u & ur gf.

U said,,,
She cant trust u,,,, right?
2. why do u think like that?
cos u urself feel untrust to urself.
cos u lost self_confidence.

U said,,,
She always thinks that she loses Sth making love with u,right?
3. it’s clear that u never believe both of ur gf & her love.

U said,,,,,
U didn’t do any mistakes but she cant accept,,,,right?
4. I don’t know exactly what do u mean?
Only 1 my one_sided view might b childish. 🙂
*She love u so much tat she can’t accept any bad things falling upon u.
*she worry about ur life so much more than herself.

U said,,,,
U love freedom,,,right?
5. Ofcourse,,,men like freedom so much. 😛
*she might told u “don’t do,,don’t go,,don’t drink,,,n so on”
Am I right? 😛
Coz it’s called women. (Full of worry)
Coz it’s showed her mother treatment. (If she didn’t love u,no need to try)
Coz she wants to b ur no.1. (She need ur care)

All of my 1,2,3,4,5 are only one my one-sided view.
All r only my suggestion.

The last one is really important.
Did she really love money,glory,worth,fame?
🙁
It isn’t sound great. 🙁
B careful.
Not safe.

But according to ur words & feeling,,I m sure that she isn’t that kind of bad girl.

commentinfo By: ei lay at Dec 11, 2012
Comment #8

ခံစားခ်က္ ျပင္းလွေခ်လား ကဗ်ာ ဆရာၾကီးရယ္၊ ေပ်ာ္ရာမွာမေနရ ေတာ္ရာမွာေနရတဲ႔ ကဗ်ာဆရာၾကီး၇ဲ႔ ခံစားခ်က္ေပါက္ကြဲသံေတြက ေတာ္ေတာ္ျပင္းတာပဲ။ ဘာတဲ႔ အူအံုးမယ္ဆိုပဲ

commentinfo By: kyaw gyi at Dec 11, 2012
Comment #9

Thanks for your all suggestions for my poems and me .

commentinfo By: kyawsanoo at Dec 28, 2012

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